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I was on my way to my lab where I was cooking Meth,also known as Methylamine.
I got there and I started cooking non stop for three weeks straight.I got all my meth sold, but forgot to clean the rest up. I made seven hundred and eighty thousand.
One day I was asleep with a girl I hooked up with a girl from the club from last night. I heard someone scream :DEA open the door Now!!
I locked the door and opened the window I looked there was no one there only police vans from the DEA I ran straight out of the window I fell down on the garden. Somebody screams
:Aryan!! I looked around me someone got out of the police van then he screamed again : Aryan Aryan aref is that you?!?
I ran as fast I could to my car and drove away as fast as I could. I went home and took a can of gasoline and a lighter then I went back later at night that day. When I got there i spilt gasoline over the entire lab and set it on fire. I kept myself there for 5 minutes just weirdly staring at the fire then I got in the car and got the pedal to the metal. I went home later and suddenly someone says :I know it was you that did that, and comes out with a gun
I looked scared at him and said who are you what do you want he said my name is Heimer Friggn.
So he said :watch out before i’ll burn your house down! And then later he left I went inside and got high and forgot about all this because it had been a stressful day for me. So I invited a bunch of people and got high with them and had a party for 3 days in a row day and night there was a party for 3 whole days. The night was cold so I went inside when the party was over. I got upstairs and I looked into my closed where I had my stash of money, it was all stolen I we’re so high I didn’t even care. gotta sleep I told myself so I slept for a whole day and woke up sober and tired. Later I went to the supermarket and bought some gear for another round of cooking meth I bought a conical laboratory flask and some other stuff. Later some guy that was working there asked me what I would do with that kinda equipment.
And I said why do you care! so I bought it and got home and started cooking again for some hours. And then later I got outside and drank a beer with my neighbor.Then I got inside and continue.
Later that day someone knocked, And it was Heimer the one that did threat to burn down my house he said :Wanna cook?
Det finns vissa slarvfel. Bland annat saknas mellanrum och punkter på sina ställen.
Som Dunderklumpen sa, det saknas mellanrum och punkter, men framförallt kommatecken. Utan kommatecken blir texten betydligt svårare att läsa.
Generellt sett kan du tänka att svenskans skrivregler också gäller i engelskan. Att tänka på:
- Det skall alltid vara mellanrum efter kommatecken, kolon, och punkt
- Använd " " när någon pratar
- Meningar ska helst inte börja med ordet "and", det är inte en del av det klassiska skriftspråket eftersom "och" används för att binda samman olika satser.
- Ordet jag skrivs alltid med stort I
"seven hundred and eighty thousand" - tal som är större än tolv skrivs alltid med siffror. Ange gärna enheten på vad du fick seven hundred and eighty thousand av också
"One day I was asleep with a girl I hooked up with a girl from the club from last night." - förstår inte riktigt denna mening?
"I went back later at night that day" - på natten den dagen låter lite udda
"had a party for 3 days in a row day and night there was a party for 3 whole days" - du har i princip skrivit samma sak två gånger
Har inte jag skrivit 3 weeks och 3 days? asså jag har skrivit 2 olika saker vilket är det du menar att jag har skrivit samma sak?
Tack för hjälpen
Mvh
