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Hejsan! Jag har skrivit ett litet låtsas NP, där jag enbart haft den riktiga provtiden på mig att skriva en text, inte gjort vidare ändringar efter att tiden gått ut samt stängt av all stavnings-hjälp osv när jag skrivit texten. Nu när jag läser igenom den i efterhand så finns det två saker jag själv tycker hade kunnat förbättras: dels att vissa meningar kan vara lite för långa, men texten känns även ganska repetitiv på något vis.

Är oändligt tacksam för all respons!

Om det finns någon lärare här, vad hade ni satt för betyg på detta?

För att nå ett A, bör jag utveckla mina resonemang kanske? De kanske är lite för korta?

Where I live, being a teenager is quite peaceful and many are privileged enough to have the opportunity to choose their own path in life. Friends are also something many put high value to. However, it is important to note that teen-life can be described in miscellaneous ways depending on who you ask, due to their personal experiences. 

The main topic I would like the youth conference to discuss is social media and its impact on the mental health of teenagers. Many use social media on a daily basis, and often consume content that occasionally can be quite harmful to their mental wellbeing. On the other hand, social media also has positive things to offer, such as the ability to stay in touch with friends. No matter how far apart they are, it is possible to still talk to each other.

Speaking of friendships, they are one of the core-parts of a teenager's life. During the teenage years, people tend to seek connections with people outside their family by making friends. As of today, people sadly struggle with finding true and genuine friends that do not want to take advantage of oneself. This is becoming a widely spread issue. I have witnessed many people saying rude things about their best friend, when the person in question has been absent. Yet, it is crucial to have friends, partly because of the social skills you develop while having friends, but also the moral and emotional support you receive during tough periods in life.  

Ultimately, I suggest the youth conference to discuss the way environmental changes affect teenagers. It is a quite discussed topic among them. A majority experience anxiety and stress thinking about how their future on this planet is going to look like, due to global warming and other negative changes made by human force. For instance the deforestation ruining homes to millions of species and lives, which in the long run is affecting the people as well. 

Because social media and the internet continues to be on the rise and constantly under development, it might play a massive part in the lives of future teenagers. Furthermore, I sincerely hope that teens are going to be allowed to make more decisions about their own future and current life-situation. Maybe this will lead to less pressure to achieve things that society and adults expect them to, making them more independent and taking active choices. Preparing themselves for adulthood, to put it short. 

In conclusion, I advise the youth conference to talk about the impact social media has on teenagers, as well as the importance of good friendships and the environmental anxiety experienced by a vast majority of today's teenagers. I am quite optimistic about the future teenage life, but there are also some minor parts that could be concerning, such as the preposterous use of Social media.