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Hallå igen!
Jag sitter här och funderar om jag har några grammatiska fel eller om jag uttryck mig fel. Här är en del av min rapport och här är den delen där man ska berätta om vad konsekvenserna är utifrån den händelse jag har valt att rapportera om. Storyn jag har valt är Corona pandemin och hur det påverkar det mentala hälsan.
Tack i förhand!
"As the consequences of Corona virus outbreak can play an important role on mental health. People who already lives with conditions such as anxiety and OCD are most affected. Then we have children who become emotionally disturbed due to social lockdown. As I mentioned before, the biggest consequences are suicide then we have anxiety and depression. Just from reading misinformation and no trusted sources it is exhausting people and causing legit emotional distress. If you are struggling with anxiety it can as well effect people around you in that time you mostly need them or the other way. Because anxiety can turn into anger and panic attacks and so on you are in a situation where you can`t handle it. It might also be hard to focus on something and make things done such as teleworking or home-schooling our kids. It´s harder to concentrate on anything else when the attention is on corona virus."
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The consequences of Coronavirus outbreak, can play an important role on mental health. People who already lives with conditions, such as anxiety and obsessive–compulsive disorder (OCD), are especially affected.
Jag fortsätter ett stycke.
Jag föreslår att du möblerar om texten lite. Inled som du gjort, men skriv färdigt om ångest ( OCD) och depression. Därefter kan du skriva meningen eller en litet stycke om barnen som blir isolerade.
The social lock down affects people with different types of mental illness. It could cause anxiety and depression and in really severe cases even lead to suicide.
The overload of information and misinformation from no trusted sources is exhausting and can cause emotional distress. Anxiety can turn into anger and panicattacks that could have a negative impact on people around you in times when you really need them the most.
"It might also be hard to focus on something and make things done such as teleworking or home-schooling our kids. It´s harder to concentrate on anything else when the attention is on corona virus."
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