Informative speech feedback engelska 6
Jag läser engelska 6 och jag har skrivit ett informative speech och har knåpat ihop en text men vet ej om jag har gjort rätt. Feedback vid grammatik.
Take a look on the "malala was shot in the side head while returning home by a pakastani gunman" it doesn't look right. otherwise it was really good!
stellish skrev:Take a look on the "malala was shot in the side head while returning home by a pakastani gunman" it doesn't look right. otherwise it was really good!
Hej
Skulle du ge exempel på hur jag ska ändra den?
Tack för ditt svar
Hej!
Jag hade skrivit meningen typ såhär : While returning home from school Malala was shot in the side of her head by a Taliban gunman.
eller: Upon returning home from school Malala was shot by a Taliban gunman in the side of her head.
Superbra text annars, kommer säkert bli ett jättebra tal.
