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Charles Dickens
Charles Dickens was an author. His full name was Charles John Huffam Dickens. He was born in february 7 1812, in Portsmouth.
His father’s name was John Dickens. And his mother’s name was Elizabeth Barrow. He had 7 siblings. His family were really poor when he was young.
After they had moved a couple times Charles father John went to prison in 1824, when Charles was only 12 years old. After his father was sent to prison he was forced to leave school, so he could work at a factory. This was the best help he could give to his family, to help with the income. Luckily when his father John came home he could go back to school again. But in 1827 he had to drop out of school again, to help his family again with the income. But this time he got job as an office boy. And this actually became a step to his career.
In 1836 he published his first story “Sketches by boz”. After he published his first book, did everything go well. He released more stories and sketches, one of the stories is called “the posthumous papers of the pickwick club”. Around the same time, he fell in love with Catherine Hogarth. They got 10 childrens before they separated in 1858. In 1846 he became an editor of the daily news. Around this time he started his first and one of the most famous novels, called “Oliver Twist. Which is still famous today.
His most famous books is Oliver Twist, A Christmas Carol, Nicholas Nickleby, David Copperfield and A Tale of Two Cities and Great Expectations.
Unfortunately Charles died on june 9 1870, he died of an stroke. He lived a short life, he became only 58 years old.
He’s biggest concern was to earn money of his writing, probably because in his childhood he was so poor. Another very big concern for him was that he were really sad about what happened around the world. All the wars and stuff like that. That’s is also why he often wrote stories about poor people and wars.
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Charles Dickens
Charles Dickens was an author. His full name was Charles John Huffam Dickens. He was born on February 7, 1812, in Portsmouth.
His father’s name was John Dickens. And his mother’s name was Elizabeth Barrow. He had 7 siblings. His family was really poor when he was young.
After they had moved a couple times Charles father John went to prison in 1824 when Charles was only 12 years old. After his father was sent to prison he was forced to leave school, so he could work at a factory. This was the best help he could give to his family, to help with the income. Luckily when his father John came home he could go back to school again. But in 1827 he had to drop out of school again, to help his family again with the income. But this time he got a job as an office boy. And this actually became a step in his career.
In 1836 he published his first story “Sketches by Boz”. After he published his first book, did everything goes well. He released more stories and sketches, one of the stories is called “the posthumous papers of the Pickwick club”. Around the same time, he fell in love with Catherine Hogarth. They got 10 children before they separated in 1858. In 1846 he became an editor of the daily news. Around this time he started his first and one of the most famous novels, called “Oliver Twist. Which is still famous today.
His most famous books are Oliver Twist, A Christmas Carol, Nicholas Nickleby, David Copperfield and A Tale of Two Cities and Great Expectations.
Unfortunately, Charles died on June 9, 1870, he died of a stroke. He lived a short life, he became only 58 years old.
His biggest concern was to earn money from his writing, probably because in his childhood he was so poor. Another very big concern for him was that he was really sad about what happened around the world. All the wars and stuff like that. That’s is also why he often wrote stories about poor people and wars.
