Engelska 6 Literary analysis with a thesis statement

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“By the time the plane was airborne I’d forgotten England even existed.” Reveal the main character Richard in the adventurous novel “The Beach” (Garland pp. 115.) This book is a retelling of Richard's trip to Thailand. The novel was written in 1996 by an English author named Alex Garland and is written in an youthful language and easy-to-read text. After reading this book, it proves that just because you are on the adventure of your life does not mean that all of your problems will disappear, new ones can arise instead. 

Richard meets the french couple Etienne and Francoise in Bangkok. They  found a map on Richard’s door with a cross on and under it says “the beach”, they want to get there in the belief of getting to a secret and tourist-free beach, which they do, but what does it take to get there?

To get to this beach, there are many and big obstacles that make them question whether it was really worth the effort in the hope of getting to the secret paradise beach or not. “An overwhelming sensation washed over me, almost boredom, a strange listlessness. I was suddenly sick of how difficult this journey had become.” (Garland, pp. 84)